I am a student at in Uru MÄnuka. In 2020 I was a year 8 and in 2021 I will be a year 9. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Tuesday, March 17, 2020
100 word challenge
hi reader welcome to my story today i have been working on my 100 word challenge. this week i have been coming up with new words for my story and i have checked my work every period.
Once upon a time in a beautiful town there came by a witch that had long black hair. She had nits and her hair was puffy like it wasn't even brushed.Her skin was white as milky snow,she wore a black dress that ripped like a banana peel, and her nails were disgusting. They were long and had hair on them. Her broom was damaged,her face was horrible as she had put too much foundation on, and even her pet cat was ugly. It was heavy as a rock, smelly as a skunk,and looked liked a blobfish.
when i started writing my first sentence it was horrible i new the teacher would not like it so the i started to think of more words to impress my teacher.
when i reading it it didn't really make sense so then i had to chge it and it was challenging for me to think of a word that suit my story.
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